Eternal Slumber

موضوع: Eternal Slumber الثلاثاء مارس 08, 2011 3:18 am

Hello,respected members,
really,it was a very long time since I've enjoyed my times in forums coz this one was the best and I hope it'll be the best sooner

I wrote this poem long time ago ,yet I didn't put it in old OZ I guess so enjoy it

Eternal Slumber

Where is the light!
Am I at night?
Or did I lose my sight
Tell me if I am right!

Oh dear me

I am alone in that place
I am the new dead of human race
So,where am I in that case?

Oh dear me

I am in eternal slumber
In a dark small chamber

Smells like dust on old books
Feels like cold rocks

Oh dear me

I hear voices all around
They are my neighbours of the underground

I wanted to tell them my story
I liked them to learn about my glory

But noone heared or cared
Everybody was either happy or scared

I heard screams that reached the highest skies
And laughters like songs of a bird that flies

I was confused and hopeful
I was embarresed and cheerful

I knew that there is God
Whom I loved in the dreamy world

I admitted my mistakes
With a heart that cries and shakes

Before I came to that grave
So I was happy not to be Saton's slave

Yes I still have sins like mountains
But God's mercy flows like pure fountains

God the Almighty,I am the poor dead
Whose body came from soil and to it ,it returned to have a bed
Have mercy upon me Oh compassionate God
I ask you heaven despite my sins
Because you are the most Merciful ,the most Compassionate
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موضوع: رد: Eternal Slumber الخميس مارس 10, 2011 12:33 am

impressive lines
I liked your best chosing for the rhyme words
well-done dear

may allah rewind us heaven

keeeeep it up

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