Snow Walking

موضوع: Snow Walking الإثنين ديسمبر 27, 2010 1:23 am

Snow walking
River tumbling
Half moon watching
Robin calling
Trees posing
Cheeks flushing
Eyes glinting
Smiles bursting
Laughter ringing
Feet slipping
Arms catching
Love dancing
Heart melting
Evening falling
Christmas nearing
Peace descending
Simply living
Snow walking
~~~

This was a poem written by a girl. she had been walking in the snow
with 2 people she loved dearly
the feeling was one of deep peacefulness and she was glad that she wrote a poem about it
Later that afternoon her mom slipped away, quietly, peacefully
She was glad that she has the poem from that afternoon
Wishing you all much love & peace
.

موضوع: رد: Snow Walking الجمعة ديسمبر 31, 2010 9:11 am

i read it n it was so hard i think it was test
becaus the speech is very eloquent

but it's was nice
for that i think any one have pro english he will understand it all n know that's so good

but for me not all of the poem

what ever i think who writed he have beautiful look

thanks

موضوع: رد: Snow Walking السبت يناير 01, 2011 3:14 am

hey poly

these are so nice words
nicely and simply said
and it has a special and sad occasion
for the writer she will never forget that
day :::: coz it was the day she had lost
her mom
it must have been so hard to come back
after all those years or days to post the last
happy moments she spent with her

anyway i have googled the poem lool as usual
it was written by a Joana paterson
and she has an amazing site for confident writing
i loved being at her sight it was wooooow

thank you dear for the nice topic
love u and keep writing and posting
:,mhn9806:

موضوع: رد: Snow Walking السبت يناير 01, 2011 3:42 am

F.Flores كتب:: i read it n it was so hard i think it was test
becaus the speech is very eloquent

but it's was nice
for that i think any one have pro english he will understand it all n know that's so good

but for me not all of the poem

what ever i think who writed he have beautiful look

thanks

hello brother
it's ok if you don't understand it all
at least we try to get its meaning
so don't worry whenever you find such unknown words for ya

thanks for your passing by
I appreciate it

have

a nice day

موضوع: رد: Snow Walking السبت يناير 01, 2011 3:46 am

AprilGirl كتب:: hey poly

these are so nice words
nicely and simply said
and it has a special and sad occasion
for the writer she will never forget that
day :::: coz it was the day she had lost
her mom
it must have been so hard to come back
after all those years or days to post the last
happy moments she spent with her

anyway i have googled the poem lool as usual
it was written by a Joana paterson
and she has an amazing site for confident writing
i loved being at her sight it was wooooow

thank you dear for the nice topic
love u and keep writing and posting
:,mhn9806:

hey Apriloo

yeah, you are right .. the poem is for her
and I'm a member in thier site - confident writing
so they sent me this poem and I always get nice mails from them ^^

and you are right about what you said about this poem
we just keep our memories with us all of the rest of our life

thanks for oyur nice coming dear
have a

lovely day

موضوع: رد: Snow Walking الثلاثاء مارس 08, 2011 3:27 am

Sorrow is ever time with every where and every time within the wole of any person on this earth

we walk on snow or grass,what matters is the beoved people around us

It's better to say I love you mom or dad now than before it's too late

thanks a lot

موضوع: رد: Snow Walking الخميس مارس 10, 2011 1:14 am

yeah , it is like that

Thanks dear for your nice passing & wise saying

all the best for u