My Sole Lone ~

موضوع: My Sole Lone ~ السبت يناير 01, 2011 4:24 am

O my sole lone
How I really got used to you.
I get lost
When I just stepped in this crowded spot

My mind, unable to take any direction
My heart cannot be shaped peacefully
My soul feels no ease
Needs a breeze to soar in

One chance to survive
Won't you be my savior? a
I can't be there anymore
No more crowds I want
I just wanna be alone
Only you my sole lone

Little hearts we carry inside
With feelings we can't afford to hide anymore
Empty spaces, huge skies
But agitated emotions, full sensations
No more pain to gain
No more rise to be fallen from
I'd better have my sole lone
I survive

by just being alone

موضوع: رد: My Sole Lone ~ السبت يناير 01, 2011 4:29 am

Hey girl
I really liked your words here
they are very simple and meaningfull

my fav part is

Little hearts we carry inside
With feelings we can't afford to hide anymore
Empty spaces, huge skies
But agitated emotions, full sensations

I really like it

keep up the good work

موضوع: رد: My Sole Lone ~ السبت يناير 01, 2011 4:37 am

*لولو* كتب:: Hey girl
I really liked your words here
they are very simple and meaningfull

my fav part is

Little hearts we carry inside
With feelings we can't afford to hide anymore
Empty spaces, huge skies
But agitated emotions, full sensations

I really like it

keep up the good work

hey dear
glad to see u passing by
I like when people choose thier fav part from my poems
thanksooo

موضوع: رد: My Sole Lone ~ السبت يناير 01, 2011 4:42 am

*لولو* كتب:: Hey girl
I really liked your words here
they are very simple and meaningfull

my fav part is

Little hearts we carry inside
With feelings we can't afford to hide anymore
Empty spaces, huge skies
But agitated emotions, full sensations

I really like it

keep up the good work

hey dear
glad to see u passing by
I like when people choose thier fav part from my poems
thanksooo

موضوع: رد: My Sole Lone ~ الأحد يناير 02, 2011 11:17 am

hi girl

i really like it

n i feel it so much

keep it up

n thanks

موضوع: رد: My Sole Lone ~ الثلاثاء يناير 04, 2011 12:28 am

F.Flores كتب:: hi girl

i really like it

n i feel it so much

keep it up

n thanks

glad that you like it

thanks for passing by

موضوع: رد: My Sole Lone ~ الأحد يناير 09, 2011 3:48 am

بوليانا

what you said is so true
sometimes getting used to someone
then having to loose him or her is very hard
it makes us lost and confused
its like there is a big gap between our old life
and the life we built with them
we cant move on and we cant stay still
we are just totaly lost betwee two worlds
and just then that we wish we had stayed alone from begining
having to live alone is less painful than having to loose someone

i hate to sound like this
Sad

but i loved your words a lot
keep going gilr i miss these words from you
love u

موضوع: رد: My Sole Lone ~ الأربعاء يناير 12, 2011 6:47 am

AprilGirl كتب:: بوليانا

what you said is so true
sometimes getting used to someone
then having to loose him or her is very hard
it makes us lost and confused
its like there is a big gap between our old life
and the life we built with them
we cant move on and we cant stay still
we are just totaly lost betwee two worlds
and just then that we wish we had stayed alone from begining
having to live alone is less painful than having to loose someone

i hate to sound like this

but i loved your words a lot
keep going gilr i miss these words from you
love u

yeah true
that's why i see it's better to stay alone with nobody to love

happy that u loved what i wrote
thanks for ur sweet coming
^^